Fruity-Loop-Mixer's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mary Had A Phat Beat]

good,

it's new, orignal...but you gots a big problem, (i use to do it too)
and that is that you end up with too many sounds at once.
I'd like to ask, is this done in fruity loops?
If it is, i'd like to take a look at it, maybe i could help iron out the bugs.
[e-mail]
either e-mail me or use msn.

ForNoReason responds:

thanks for your help/ideas!

[Notion]

Nice flow,

probably none of my business, but how long is it, very hard to tell if your looping a sound in there or NG is. either way it has an excellent flow, hardly noticeable.

Hammer-Clock responds:

The song is not looped, but I will admit ot it being quite repititive. I can not remember the exact lengh, but it is under 2 minutes. Thanks for listening!

[Newgrounds Rulez 1.1]

What was that?

I'd really like to say i liked it, but i didn't.
There was little originality,(your just hoping that by sucking up, they won't notice the simple style loop underneath) i was fairly unclear when he started going into the skipping thing, (if it's a generated voice I would try making the voice say it like this,
Newgrounds rules, newgrounds rules, newgrounds, newgrounds newgrounds rules, instead of trying to rap the sound file. Overall, it could become better by simply putting more effort in.(if you spent 30 minutes on this, next time, use an hour and a half, the extra time is worth it, even if it's just making a transition sound better.)
(man i get long winded)

Rubbertje responds:

A track I've made..